Dialogue and Stage Directions
also see Dialouge
http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb03_00_playwriting.htm#dialogue
also see Improvisation
http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/05_02_improvexample.htm
Although we are committed
to improvisation, it certainly is a good, imaginative writing assignment
for the students to write dialogue for their scenarios.
Vocabulary: scenario,
character, setting, problem, sequence of events, conclusion/solution,
dialogue, stage directions, dramaturge
Use:
- To
teach students about dialogue, what characters say, and the form that
is used in writing a play
- To
develop writing and editing skills
Standards
- Theatre:
- Write
dialogue that reflects the voice and reveals the motivation of the characters,
and, with stage directions, tells the story
- Use
correct playwriting form
- Read
scripts for the class with poise, vocal variety and gesture that communicate
the meaning and feeling of the play
- Rewrite
scripts considering the audience response
- Language
Arts
- Write
a story with appropriate dialogue
- Use
correct spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar and usage
- Convey
meaning through verbal and nonverbal communication
Materials: Copies of
the students' scripts for the play readers Your Role:
- The
students should have written a scenario (see previous lesson) or have
an idea of the characters and story they want to tell through dialogue.
- With
the students, read the definition of dialogue and stage directions in
the Theatre Book, http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/03_00_playwriting.htm
- Read
the dialogue example for your grade level. The last two examples are
by professional playwrights and are appropriate for middle school children.
Dialogue Examples, by 3rd graders
http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/03_07_dialog3rd.htm
Dialogue Examples, by 4th graders
http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/03_07_dialog4th.htm
Dialogue Examples, by 5th graders
http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/03_07_dialog5th.htm
Dialogue Examples from The Little Princess
http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/03_07_dialogprincess.htm
Dialogue Examples from The Birthday of the Infanta
http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/03_07_dialoginfanta.htm\
- Help
the students imagine their characters and what they are saying. There
are a number of ways that this can be done.
- Improvise a scene in front of the class using characters and situations
the students have chosen. If the students are quite new to drama,
your stepping into role may be helpful in extending and enriching
the vocabulary and content of the dialogue. Discuss what the dialogue
revealed about the characters and story.
- Divide the class into pairs or small groups and, working at the
same time, have them quietly improvise dialogue related to the characters
and stories they are planning to write about.
- Help the students 'image' their characters and what they are saying.
Sometimes a relaxation exercise is a good way to focus attention before
beginning. (See theatre warm-ups http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/05_01_warmups.htm
)
Tell the students that
they want to 'see' and 'hear' their characters in their minds-eye.
Tell them to shut their eyes. Sidecoach their thinking process. For
example:
'See your characters. Where are they? Inside or
out? Are they hot or cold? What are they wearing? What do they want? How
do they feel?
Now have them talk about the problem. Hear
what they are saying. . .'All
of this should be quietly presented and is there only to help the students
focus. Fewer words on your part, rather than more, will probably help
the students the most.
- Have
the students write their dialogues. Your moving from desk to desk to
help them deal with the new form, spelling, etc. will be helpful.
- Collect
the plays. Have the students read about the role of a 'dramaturge' at
http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/03_00_playwriting.htm Tell
them that the class will become the dramaturgs by listening to the plays
as they are read and by reporting to the playwrights what they understood
about the story, setting and characters.
- Have selected 'good
readers' practice reading the plays out loud.
We are close to a university and often ask graduate students to come and
read the children's plays, or often we ask students from a higher grade
to read the plays.
- If you have students read the plays, it is helpful to have them read about Play Reading at the end of the acting section in the
Theatre Book. http://artswork.asu.edu/arts/students/tb/05_00_acting.htm Be certain to have one of the performers read the
stage directions plus the descriptions of characters and setting.
- Prepare the class
to listen to the readings. Review the role of audience and dramaturgs as good listeners who will need to answer the following questions so that the playwrights can rewrite
their plays and make them even better.
Questions about
Dialogue
- What was the story about?
- What dialogue helped tell the story?
- What stage directions helped you see what is happening in the play?
- What was the setting?
- Who were the characters?
- What dialogue fit
the characters?
- What were the characters
feeling?
- What else do you need to know from
the dialogue or stage directions to help you understand and enjoy the play?
- After the play readings, discuss the plays using the questions above. The point is to let the students know, not if their play was good or bad, but when it let the audience know the story and characters they were writing about.
- Have the students
rewrite their dialogues. We often type the final versions and put them in a book for the class and their parents to read.
Time:
- Preparing
for and writing the dialogues 30 minutes
- Preparing
to read the plays, 15-20 minutes
- Reading
and discussing the plays in class, depends on number of plays, but for
younger students probably no more than 4 or 5 minutes per script. Older
students who will write more may require 5-10 minutes each.
- Rewriting/editing
time, 5-10 minutes
Assessment:
- Did
the students' description of characters and setting that precedes the dialogue help you see them?
- Did the dialogue, word choice and punctuation, find the 'voice' for each character?
- Did the dialogue and stage directions convey what will happen during the play?
- Did the play convey the meaning the playwright intended?
- Was the playwriting form followed? Was the text proofread for spelling, capitalization, punctuation (character voice may mean'usage' is less than precise),and sentence structure?
- Did the students, during the critique, focus on what the playscommunicated and choose words so they were careful of the feelings of those being critiqued?
- Did the students rewrite the play after the reading, making changes as suggested by the audience?
  
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